Hey everybody! So we are another
week closer to having our final papers completed! Over this past week, I have
been working on organizing all of my analysis to create and write my results
section. After concluding my analysis, I found seven major themes among my
interview and survey data that really explain why the school I am studying is
the way it is. These themes are high expectations, quality teachers, a focus on
academics, a strong support network, a motivation to be at school, a strong
community, and teacher autonomy. Although finding the themes was not very
difficult, it was challenging to figure out how to incorporate my observation data
into my results, since my surveys and interviews focused on the school as a
whole, whereas my observations did not. Eventually though, after I did some research,
I was able to find the characteristics that are indicative of good teaching,
and so I was able to use those to code my observations.
Anyways, going into this week, I know
that my discussion section is going to be difficult to write. Although I am a
little bit worried about how I am going to be organizing everything, I am more
worried about figuring out what to include or omit, because there is so much to
talk about. First and foremost, I need to answer my research question. In my
results, I provide a summary of what I found with each theme, but now I need to
explicitly state what specifically works to make a charter school successful.
Although the straightforward answer would be to just say that other schools
should do whatever this school is doing, it unfortunately is not that simple.
This is because charter schools are ultimately schools of choice, and so an
educational model for one school might not necessarily transfer well to
another. In addition to this though, there are some far more fundamental
questions that should be approached, such as whether the measure of success I used
in this study, which was based off of grades and test scores, is even an
accurate measure of success. Also, I need to explain why my results were what
they were, where the error in my research was, and what future fields of
research could be. Anyways, I am going to stop ranting now, and instead I am
going to talk about some discussions that I have read that are related to my
paper.
1. Bortree, Denise
Sevick. 2005. Presentation of Self on the Web: an ethnographic study
of teenage girls’ weblogs. Gainesville, Florida: University of Florida.
Although the content
of this research does not relate to what I am doing, it is also an
unconventional ethnography in that it seeks to understand a community not
traditionally studied in this type of research. This study sought to understand
how teenage girls interrelate with one another through blogs, just as I am trying
to understand how the different parts of a charter school come together to
create a high achieving community. I chose this study because this ethnography
did a good job being concise in its overall analysis and conclusion. This paper
was also qualitative in nature, and so the discussion section was spent really
tying together the different components of the community. In this section, it
started with the smaller components and become more and more broad, which is
something that I need to do, because I have many moving pieces in my research.
2. Raymond, et al. 2013. National Charter School
Study. Stanford,
California: Center for Research on Education Outcomes (CREDO), Stanford
University.
This study did a good job in laying out and explaining
the implications of their research. It sought to determine if charter schools
are successful or not, and so the discussion focused on laying out a few key points
at the end, and then it explained those in greater depth. I think that this may
be an effective way for me to organize everything at the end, because there are
a lot of implications involved in my research, and so explicitly stating and
then discussing them may be useful.
3. Buddin, Richard, and Ron Zimmer. 2005. Is
Charter School Competition in California Improving the Performance of
Traditional Public Schools? Smith Richardson Foundation
What was useful about this study is that in the
conclusion, it tied the purpose of the study with the results that were found
to show to what extent their research was able to answer their question. In
their conclusion, they acknowledge how other literature has mixed results regarding
the same question being asked, but they tried to explain the inconsistencies.
Although there is not any research that has tried to answer the exact same
question, there are a couple sources that I have that postulate what makes a school
successful, and so what they thought is something that I should address and
comment on.
Anyways, I have a lot of work ahead of me this week, but I am
looking forward to having a finished product soon. Sorry about such a long
post. Until next week!
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Hey Brian!
ReplyDeleteSounds like it's going really good! I agree that it's going to be really tough cutting stuff out of your discussion, especially since it's limited by a word count. So not only can you not talk about all you want to talk about, you can't go into crazy detail. You said the first study you looked at did a great job of being concise. What did they choose to include? How specific did they get in their discussion of the results and how much did they still sort of leave up to the reader to interpret?
I agree with you that your second study may be the one to emulate just because (not to trash transitions) but transitions are really bulk and introducing the broader topics all at once at the beginning may help you keep the section as short and sweet as you need it to be.
With your last study, yes! Try to bring in other studies that have been done so you can show how your research fits in and fills the gaps that other papers may have missed. Also, you can talk about inconsistencies across the board, which could lead into further implications and future directions of the research field.
Keep powering through! You're almost there!
Brian,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like your discussion section is where you're really going to have to crack down (as you said), so I'm just going to comment on some stuff that I think you should focus more on. Overall, the discussion section is a chance to put your research in conversation with a much larger literature in your field, and I think you might be straying a little away from that based on your blog post (although your third source does address it). I think you especially need to think what your research means relative to other studies in the field, and not only for other charter schools. For that it seems like your last source is perfect.
You also need to talk about the future directions and implications your study has on the literature, and it seems like the first Bortree source is perfect for that since he had a relatively unconventional study.
Anwyays, keep up the good work!
Akash
Briaaaaannnnnn!!! This isn't the first time I have read your blog and I am happy to say that I am impressed with the progress you have made. I believe last time I read your blog you were finishing up your data collection and finding a way to transcribe the data.
ReplyDeleteOne awesome thing that stood out for me in your sources (Bortree) is that you are looking to take a inductive approach in organizing your discussion. The reason I like this is because by going from specific to broad, you talk about specific findings and their corresponding examples before finishing with the larger implications of your research. I know you were worried about organization so I do think this is a good approach. You can combine this with Raymond's approach by stating your conclusions, talking about them, and then applying them to the overall educational system. Anyway, keep up the good work!! You're almost there!
I do think you're going to have to be really purposeful about organization, as you mentioned that you have a ton of moving pieces in this research (e.g., different themes, different methods, etc.). I also echo Akash's comment which emphasizes the importance of situating your findings into the academic conversation.
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